Well...... I'm not hearing much drums or bass. It works as a cover i guess but with the sped up vocals, the midi piano, and the missing drum & bass its just not that powerful a piece. It needs more layers and more of a direction. If you want to make it a real piece I would make it bolder, glitchier, and less plain. It just sounds like some beats thrown on a piano midi cover and the acapella. It just needs some more work my friend, be bolder.
