<pony><remix>This Day Aria Drum and Bass Remix

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<pony><remix>This Day Aria Drum and Bass Remix

Postby Facade » 28 Apr 2012 15:12

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Re: <pony><remix>This Day Aria Drum and Bass Remix

Postby Freewave » 28 Apr 2012 16:46

Well...... I'm not hearing much drums or bass. It works as a cover i guess but with the sped up vocals, the midi piano, and the missing drum & bass its just not that powerful a piece. It needs more layers and more of a direction. If you want to make it a real piece I would make it bolder, glitchier, and less plain. It just sounds like some beats thrown on a piano midi cover and the acapella. It just needs some more work my friend, be bolder. :|
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Re: <pony><remix>This Day Aria Drum and Bass Remix

Postby soup2504 » 28 Apr 2012 16:57

Not bad, but the kicks and snares seemed to be a LOT lower than the hats, whereas it should be the other way around. Could've used more work, but still okay.
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