I like bits from both, so I'll try to break it down based on my opinion. Keep in mind, it's only what I think. And my tastes are far from conventional.Introduction: Good. Bass could be a little heavier.
~ 34 seconds, a little more variation would be good. The bassline is too repetitive from here. Things start to change around 1:30, I think the bass should get more involved, complex. Instead it gets simpler and the melody basically gives up. Instead, the melody should increase too.
~ 2:15, the song gets good. Not a lot of 'kick' to it, drums are very light sounding. The background archipelgo (sp?) is excellent, more should be done with it though.
Melody sounds confused when introduced around 3:10, but the melody itself works when repeating. The bass during this period should be more varied.
Not enough melody near the end. The song isn't bad by any means, just sounds... confused