[4:31:00 PM] VINXIS/Olaedr/OYKXF/Omar Kamal: https://soundcloud.com/omar-yaseen-kamal/lunas-empire-unmastered is this good for releasing to the people of people
Because no one on the skype groups give feedback lol
feedbache pls
<WIP Pony Orchestral> Luna's Empire
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<WIP Pony Orchestral> Luna's Empire
by VINXIS » 28 Apr 2013 16:55
Last edited by VINXIS on 29 Apr 2013 18:38, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: <WIP Pony Orchestral> Luna's Empire
by Dr_Dissonance » 29 Apr 2013 08:18
Error 404! I'm deaf!!!
Tubeyou
You are the hero My Little Remix deserves, not the one it needs.
So we’ll hunt you. Because you can take it. Because you’re not our hero.
You’re a silent guardian of music, a watchful protector of songs.
A doctor of dissonance.
-Phillypu
You are the hero My Little Remix deserves, not the one it needs.
So we’ll hunt you. Because you can take it. Because you’re not our hero.
You’re a silent guardian of music, a watchful protector of songs.
A doctor of dissonance.
-Phillypu
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Re: <WIP Pony Orchestral> Luna's Empire
by VINXIS » 29 Apr 2013 18:38
oh
hurr
lemme replace link
hurr
lemme replace link
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Re: <WIP Pony Orchestral> Luna's Empire
by Dr_Dissonance » 30 Apr 2013 10:06
I like the idea, but the lower end is very muddy at the beginning. From 0.40 to 1.20, I can't tell what's happening, except for what I'm guessing is an orgy of drums. Saturating sections is not the best idea, so maybe consider getting rid of those overwhelming drums and instead fill it with harmony.
The heartbeat feels a little odd, I think mainly because heartbeats naturally insight fear and this piece is anything but. Alternatively, you could make the harmony more dissonant.
I would recommend making variations on that little arpeggio thing you've got going, because it starts off cool, but after a minute or two, it gets dull. Same with everything else really. When copy/pasting section, really go and make subtle changes here and there, it'll work wonders.
Concept is cool, just needs a few tweaks here and there!
The heartbeat feels a little odd, I think mainly because heartbeats naturally insight fear and this piece is anything but. Alternatively, you could make the harmony more dissonant.
I would recommend making variations on that little arpeggio thing you've got going, because it starts off cool, but after a minute or two, it gets dull. Same with everything else really. When copy/pasting section, really go and make subtle changes here and there, it'll work wonders.
Concept is cool, just needs a few tweaks here and there!
Tubeyou
You are the hero My Little Remix deserves, not the one it needs.
So we’ll hunt you. Because you can take it. Because you’re not our hero.
You’re a silent guardian of music, a watchful protector of songs.
A doctor of dissonance.
-Phillypu
You are the hero My Little Remix deserves, not the one it needs.
So we’ll hunt you. Because you can take it. Because you’re not our hero.
You’re a silent guardian of music, a watchful protector of songs.
A doctor of dissonance.
-Phillypu
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Re: <WIP Pony Orchestral> Luna's Empire
by VINXIS » 30 Apr 2013 19:18
ok will keep dis in mind! c:
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