<nonpony><house> Black Diamond

[Nine Volt]

It has nothing to do with a black version of Rarity.

https://soundcloud.com/nine-volt/black-diamond

So I got a few good reviews of this track and a bunch of not-good-but-still-appreciated-because-it-gives-me-an-idea-of-people's-opinions reviews, so I thought I'd throw it out there. Inspired by "From Limbo to Judecca" by General Mumble/Daemian, and I've been told the intro kinda sounds like the intro track to a post-apocalyptic movie. IDK, I like it.

[fatcat44101]

So, first off, its not horrible, but there is some room for improvement, just like with everyone else's tracks. that being said, here's some helpful advice. The intro isn't bad, but you could shorten it. once the beat dropped around 2:45, I regained interest in the track. I like the synths you used and it sounds unique. to improve the intro, id try and change the cords for the ambient style synth. it would help keep people interested.

This track, in my opinion can be broken up into four parts. the intro (0:00 - 2:45) then the beat part (2:45 - 4:18) then the other cord part (4:18 - 5:45) then the other beat part (5:45 - end). the cord parts and the beat parts sound very similar. if you were to switch it up a bit, it would make the track a lot better.

I hope this helps ^^

[Nine Volt]

It's ambient-inspired, so it's actually supposed to be boring and repetitive (OHHHHHH)

I kid, I kid, thanks for your input :3

[fatcat44101]

your welcome I have an ambient track I just uploaded one of my first ambient tracks. Unlike yours, mine is a bit brighter, I guess you could say. Not all ambient is boring ^^, and I didn't find your track boring once the beat dropped.