Getting Back Into Electro House

[ArtAttack]

http://soundcloud.com/samkoller/unnamed-electro-house

It's a WIP, but I'm really liking the melody on this one. Criticism appreciated, and, as Interrobang would say, give me your worst.

[Interrobang Pie]

Pretty cool man, definit-

and, as Interrobang would say, give me your worst.

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As I was saying, definitely coolio. Melody seems like every other electro house thing doodah in existence - I suppose you are emulating the style perfectly!!!

That bit starting at 1:02... you are slowly increasing the... um... the speed at which the volume travels to the sustain value thing, right?

[ArtAttack]

Yeah. You can get that effect by changing the curve of the automation. And it's just a cutoff and keytrack filter together, opening at the same rate. Haven't messed with the sustain, sounds too muddy.

[DerpyGrooves]

Great melody/chords, and the builds are just about perfect. Only bit I didn't super dig was the kick sound in the intro to the track. Sort of sounds like some GM soundfont in my ear, but otherwise everything was pretty stunning IMHO.

[ArtAttack]

I noticed that when I listened to it. The kick is just ugly >_< Fixing now.

[Aussie]

That was great, until the drop at 2:15. It needs to be about 20% heavier. Also your song kinda just jumps from one section to the next. It needs some sort of transition, if you know what I mean.