It's very obvious that you're an electronic composer writing orchestral...

It sounds pretty nice, maybe start thinking in more layers of the orchestra, as all I could hear were maybe 3 voices most of the time...creating far greater textures is one way of creating a good orchestral piece!
Also, remember there's more to the orchestra than strings and percussion!
But pretty good if this is your first try!
TubeyouYou are the hero My Little Remix deserves, not the one it needs.
So we’ll hunt you. Because you can take it. Because you’re not our hero.
You’re a silent guardian of music, a watchful protector of songs.
A doctor of dissonance.
-Phillypu