<remix><WIP> Aviators - Melody (MRPPony's Long Drive Remix)

[MRPPony]

Yep, so its official: I can't do originals. With that being said, I remixed Aviator's Melody so I could perform it at CloudCon. Afterwords, I got this 'neat' idea to do a long drive version of it so its just ridiculously long with a super slow/subtle buildup here and there.
Right now there's a lot for me to do:

Organize my workspace cause its a mess omg
Properly mix everything now that I have a sub and monitors
Remaster it
EQ certain things thanks to SMOR3S helping me out a bit with that
And quite possibly a lot more afterwords.

But nvm that, I was wondering if you all could give me some feedback as it stands now. Its almost 7 mins long so put on some headphones, lay back and just listen. I realize that after CloudCon I can't make party music so might as well just go with the 'artsy' music. :3

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/135819461/Melo ... %20WIP.mp3

[CDPP]

I actually kinda liked it without the vocals haha. Sounds way more chill as a instrumental alone

Sorry for the lack of feedback that's really the only thing that's bugging me

[MRPPony]

omg srsly? Man that's the best compliment. So if my song could somehow sound better as an instrumental, it is some proof that I am getting better. Yay!

[Flamechaser]

This puts me to sleep. .. in a good way

[Flamechaser]

The instrumental is great, and so are the vocals.. the vocals just don't seem to fit right.

Otherwise, all of my yes

good god why can't i give good feedback