<Pony> <rap> Dash Of Lightning Fire Ft Rhyme Flow & Dubious

[versal]

Me Flowny and Dubious get on the track and kill it

[itroitnyah]

So did you record the drums yourself? Because they sound like they're recorded.

So the drums are really weak and definitely need improvement. The chorus lyrics aren't very good, but the rest of the vocals are good enough. And it's well composed too.

[versal]

SHIT I FORGOT TO PUT THAT IN THE DESCRIPTION! The instrumental is actually a song by Lil Wayne called Shoot Me Down. When i heard it i immediantly got this idea so i called Flow first and then Dubious.

[itroitnyah]

Oh, haha xD you may want to put "Parody" in the title/description as well then, to avoid copyright issues. Unless you're confident that they won't find out or won't take it down.

[bigBerd]

Lol, idk bout the guy above me, I fuck with this beat. It ain't a banger but it's flithy enough and wicked chill.
All three of you did your thing on this one, I'm assuming you're the first one?
Either way, it sounds like he ain't fully know what he want his voice sound like yet, but that's cool, it's untapped potential is what it is. I'd say his verse is prolly my favorite of the three.
the 2nd guy, I don't like the effects on his voice but I think his flow most fits the beat. Got that semi-slow, heavy-hitting bars that goes with it well, y'know?
3rd dude sounds the most seasoned outta you three rappers. Dude's got his flow down pat and his multis are bomb.

[versal]

Yes mine was the first one. The whole untapped potential i seem to get alot lol. Thanks

[soultensionbenjamin]

if this is what you call killing it I'm disappointed

its a chill song but no ones really killing it
the beat is to chill and there wasn't one quotable I truly walked away with
sorry just being honest.

[versal]

Thanks soul I'm gonna go cry now ;-;