<WIP><Pony><Original><Not EDM>Wings in F Major

[SticktheFigure]

Hello, all. I haven't done much the past bit. I believe it's only been around two weeks, but it feels like at least a month. Anywho, I'd love some feedback on what I've been working on, given that you have the time.

Updated!: Current Length (As Of 27-2-13): Twelve measures, Intro and Four
https://soundcloud.com/stickthefigure/wip-wings-in-f-major-v0-18

[SticktheFigure]

Bamp-damp-a-damp.
Finally back to working on this.
But first, I actually want some feedback. I know it's not much at all currently, but I'd rather fix anything early on.

Edit: Also, added four measures.