[IDM?][typing]Average Day(WIP)

[Ohffy]

https://soundcloud.com/ohffy/average-day-wipsecwet/s-p6oeF
(not properly mixed)

I've never seriously tried to make IDM so I wanted to give it a try
Typing just seemed right for this


Criticism is welcome
And thanks for listening

[Cherax]

Sounding pretty cool! There's a kick/bass sound every now and then that's way too loud - you can see it in your waveform as a huge spike, eg. at 0:22. I reckon you can bring your percussion forward at the start. It sounds like they're under a lowpass; maybe raise the cut-off point as well as the volume. I normally find typing sounds incredibly disconcerting to listen to, but I think they work just fine here, so good job on that. I'd like to hear this when it's 'properly mixed' fo sho.

[Ohffy]

Sounding pretty cool! There's a kick/bass sound every now and then that's way too loud - you can see it in your waveform as a huge spike, eg. at 0:22. I reckon you can bring your percussion forward at the start. It sounds like they're under a lowpass; maybe raise the cut-off point as well as the volume. I normally find typing sounds incredibly disconcerting to listen to, but I think they work just fine here, so good job on that. I'd like to hear this when it's 'properly mixed' fo sho.

Heh i wasnt expecting for this to get a comment
so thanks for the crtique and ill get back to you when i mix and stuff :D