<Pony><House> Ruby

[Faren]

Since it's my kinda first release... Hello World!
I'm sure mastering is awful but i'm working on it, trying my best (at least i can see improves since my first 'song')
Ok, back to actually the song.
I've tried to use soft, melodic synths, (in my head that should represent Rarity), while also making the whole melody kinda happy and adding some random effects from time to time (Pinkie, gentlemen).
So yeah, that's pretty much it. I'd love to hear responses and, please, tell me which part should be majorly improved, that would help me a lot in the future.
https://soundcloud.com/faren-music/ruby

[R-Y-S-E]

I think the progression throughout this track sounded good, and the effects seemed to be used well. I think the pulsing 'shh' sound (or whatever you call it, there's one at about 1:16) should fade out slightly longer. The changes at 0:45 and 2:15 also sounded a bit weird to me (probably too abrupt) - I'm not sure how I'd suggest to change that, but a small break may sound good, I am however not sure
I liked the parts where the bass got louder, but I think the mastering could be improved on some of the bits where the pitch was changing around (like the bit at 2:24).

I didn't have the volume up very high so I may have missed things, but overall I liked your track.

[Faren]

I think the progression throughout this track sounded good, and the effects seemed to be used well. I think the pulsing 'shh' sound (or whatever you call it, there's one at about 1:16) should fade out slightly longer. The changes at 0:45 and 2:15 also sounded a bit weird to me (probably too abrupt) - I'm not sure how I'd suggest to change that, but a small break may sound good, I am however not sure
I liked the parts where the bass got louder, but I think the mastering could be improved on some of the bits where the pitch was changing around (like the bit at 2:24).

I didn't have the volume up very high so I may have missed things, but overall I liked your track.

Thanks a lot. Will keep your advices in mind.