[wip] Pinkie's Basement

[Arcix]

Hi guys and gals of the musical community!
I'm currently working on my first full song and would like some feedback
https://soundcloud.com/arcix/pinkies-basement-wip

[Genkar]

That random volume increase at the beginning is pretty unpleasant, and the whole thing is very repetitive to this point. I can tell you're going for a darker feel though, and you nailed that. The drums are drowned out through most of it. And speaking of drums, you might want to download some free drum samples or something, those default FL drums make me cringe.

Other than that, you're new, so I don't want to critique stuff like EQing, since there most likely isn't any. I do recommend that you look up mixing and mastering tutorials though, they're probably some of the most important things to know. And also, sound design. If you nail those, you'll be headed for great things.

[Arcix]

That random volume increase at the beginning is pretty unpleasant, and the whole thing is very repetitive to this point. I can tell you're going for a darker feel though, and you nailed that. The drums are drowned out through most of it. And speaking of drums, you might want to download some free drum samples or something, those default FL drums make me cringe.

Other than that, you're new, so I don't want to critique stuff like EQing, since there most likely isn't any. I do recommend that you look up mixing and mastering tutorials though, they're probably some of the most important things to know. And also, sound design. If you nail those, you'll be headed for great things.

Thanks for the feedback!
Yeah. I just got FL Studio about a week ago and have been cramming as much time into it as possible. I've been practicing for about 2-3 hours a day after school.