<non-pony><House> This Distance (Forest Rain/Feather)

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<non-pony><House> This Distance (Forest Rain/Feather)

Postby Glitchhog » 10 Feb 2013 07:59

New track, featuring the talents of Forest Rain and Feather. It's a love story of sorts.

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Re: <non-pony><House> This Distance (Forest Rain/Feather)

Postby Raddons » 10 Feb 2013 10:54

The vocals sound good from what I can hear, but they're so buried in the mix that it's almost difficult to point them out. And then when they get to the chorus they're so prominent. I think that contrast could possibly have been an artistic choice, but as a listener it somewhat bothers me.

Other than that wow it's a really good track dude! A fine example of good songwriting skills.
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Re: <non-pony><House> This Distance (Forest Rain/Feather)

Postby Stu Beef » 10 Feb 2013 15:57

Diggin it! My only gripe is that Feather's vocals seem a little off/out of place. It feels like there's just that much more you can do to glue them to the track a little more; not sure what kind of processing you go through, but it could be a little tighter in that regard.
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Re: <non-pony><House> This Distance (Forest Rain/Feather)

Postby Glitchhog » 11 Feb 2013 22:03

Cheers for the feedback guys! This has actually blown up quite nicely on SoundCloud, as Silva Hound seems to love it. I'm quite happy with it, but I would like the vocals to stand out more. Shouldn't detract from the music too much though, it's been received quite well.
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Re: <non-pony><House> This Distance (Forest Rain/Feather)

Postby Raddons » 12 Feb 2013 00:16

Well yeah it's a real great song! I enjoyed it, and it seems to be getting what it deserves.
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