[first collab][breakcore]Ohffy & Bitxeel(WIP)(unnamed)

[Ohffy]

First collaboration project would love to know what you guys think of it

https://soundcloud.com/ohffy/ohffy-and-bitxeel

So one day i was working on a song and got frustrated
so i sent bixteel what i had so far
then through a series of events this came out

still a WIP feedback is appreciated

[Spactrum]

I have a little issue with the bass
the first 2 bars are good, but in 3 and 4 you can't hear it all.
I would look for a bass that covers the frequencies you can hear
And also a harder kick would be nice
I don't know much about breakcore, but for the average musician, this feels energised.
I like it

[Ohffy]

I have a little issue with the bass
the first 2 bars are good, but in 3 and 4 you can't hear it all.
I would look for a bass that covers the frequencies you can hear
And also a harder kick would be nice
I don't know much about breakcore, but for the average musician, this feels energised.
I like it

Hey thanks for listenning man
i see what you mean with the bass and we'll fix it right up
Thanks again (i might put a nice distorted kick in there could liven it up some more)

[dos.h]

I have a little issue with the bass
the first 2 bars are good, but in 3 and 4 you can't hear it all.
I would look for a bass that covers the frequencies you can hear
And also a harder kick would be nice
I don't know much about breakcore, but for the average musician, this feels energised.
I like it

What Spactrum said is pretty accurate, as a breakcore buff myself it's not too bad...a bit boring though (as in it's just the same few patterns repeating for a couple minutes), needs to be a little more dynamic. Breakcore isn't a very linear genre in terms of patterns that are in the song.