<pony><remix>Sim Gretina - Allons-y [Ptepix Club Mix]

[Ptepix]

How the hell did I make this in under 4 hours????
I'm so confused XD
Please give me some feedback! I'm done with it...I don't want to ruin it at this point.

https://soundcloud.com/ptepix/sim-gretina-allons-y-ft

[Spactrum]

I don't know the original, so I'm gonna feedback on the whole thing alone

-the vocals are nice
-the chords could use a bit noise
-the middle part kicks very good, but the screamer is a bit too loud
-I'm tired now, detailed feedback tomorrow :d

[Ptepix]

I don't know the original, so I'm gonna feedback on the whole thing alone

-the vocals are nice
-the chords could use a bit noise
-the middle part kicks very good, but the screamer is a bit too loud
-I'm tired now, detailed feedback tomorrow :d

:3 ok XD
(Honestly don't know what screamer you are talking about though o.O)

[Xane]

I think your synth around the 1:15 mark could be a bit more powerful. Needs a bit of grittiness, in my opinion. Your intro is phenomenal! Vocals sound off beat during the verse and the build, though..

[Ptepix]

Thanks :3

The vocals ARE offset...they aren't off beat though XD I made sure. Trying to be a little unique in that respect.

As far as the synth goes yeah...it could be louder...it is a organ though so I wouldn't make it grittier.

[Spactrum]

[Ptepix]

Oh...hmmm ok. I always thought it sounded like a really disto organ