<Pony> <Original> <Orchestral> Farewell

[Zykrath]

"I'm sorry..."

Get it here: http://zykrath.bandcamp.com/track/farewell



Art: zedrin.deviantart.com/art/Home-350249191

[Genkar]

This is pretty beautiful, I love pieces like this. All the aux percussion is placed really well. Like, every time I hear the chimes, I get chills. The change at 1:38 is epic. You did an excellent job on this, I just wish it was longer.

[Forza SoundFire]

Great sound - well mixed and balanced.

A few spots where the piano sounds like it's been compressed too much - try spreading the chord or altering your compressor - or both. Be careful, where you do spread a chord, that it doesn't sound robotic.

Try playing with the tempo, rubato (maybe play a single line in if you're not a keyboard player), expression and velocities. Especially expression of the backing string orch. and choir.

Consider substitution chords (chords that are very similar but not the same (ie. Dminor and FMajor)), and changing the bass note of the chord to give some variation.
Or try play with the dissonance between E and F in your AMinor/CMajor 6 chords.


Hope that helps!

[Ptepix]

Feels! ;-;

[TranquilHooves]

I really like the layering here, everything comes in right at the perfect time. Nice job.

[Ptepix]

Funny thing is I had made a song with a similar concept but I never posted it anywhere