<Pony><Original><Pop Punk> Moustache

[vaceslav]

There's still a few things left to fix up, but I think I'm close to having this one ready to go.

https://soundcloud.com/vaceslav/moustache

This brings my tally up to:

Pinkie Pie Songs: 4
AJ songs: 1
Marceline songs: 1

Also wanted to run this title by y'all; a Pinkie themed ep called "Pinkamina Is A Punk Rocker".
Puns are fun.

[vladnuke]

The vocals could be louder, the guitar could be clearer, the drums could be punchier, and the synth could be brighter. Mixing, yo.

But the lyrics are cool and the song itself is really nice, just the production side could benefit from some polish. Actually really nice job, just mix and master.

[Stu Beef]

In addition to the (legitimate) production critique, that last hook can definitely be lead into better.

In terms of the solo you have: 1. a descending line 2. a slower rhythmic figure than the previous

that's all well and good, but it gives the impression of a decrease or lull. You can still take advantage of that by having a contrast between that moment and the chorus itself, but you'd have to find a way to tone down all the other elements to make a bigger contrast (like cutting the band out on that descending triplet thing).

You could also go the other way and give the impression of a crescendo in energy, but I feel that for a short song, that contrast would be more effective. Either way, the basic idea is that you could lead better at that transition.

e. forgot to mention that the song was pretty sweet otherwise; diggin' the vocals too actually.