<wip><semi-hardcore-kinda> Magic Eater WIP, feedback?

[Nine Volt]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/95632350/Magic% ... %20wip.mp3

Unsure of whether or not I want to release this song (ever, that is). Total time spent currently probably amounts to 7-8 hours.

It was inspired by one of Gancher's songs, but other than inspiration I made this all on my own without referring to any similar tracks for 'guidance' on the genre. This is the first thing of this kind I've made, so it was certainly an adventure of sorts, but I'm really quite on the fence as to whether or not I want to release it.

[Conduit]

Here's some things I noticed that could be improved:
-Clips at multiple points
-The snare is a bit hard / has too many highs in the beginning
-The first lead introduced is really weak
-The hi-hats after the drop are really dry
-At the second drop the "magic eater" vox are really overpowered by the rest of the song. The "magic eater" itself is really good though, I like whatever you put your voice through for it.

I might be missing some things since this is really not my genre, but overall I liked it. You should definitely release it.