Ok first off this is pretty great for a person with 4 subs. Kinda shocked but then again it's only your first or second track? The white noise is a little loud in places, the music is a little single layered in places, and a i think there is likely some EQ work that could be done on here.... BUT i love the melodies, i love the synths, i love some of the automation and effects that come in. Did you think of adding any vocal samples or cut ups? I think those would help benefit this track as well as tie them into the show even more. There's a danger for EQD and fans not see the direct tie in into the show and i think that some Pinkiepieswear type vocal cutups in HERE would make this 20% cooler for an already pretty great track. Likewise a single character named track, while specific and on topic, might not be as memorable or stick out like it could from the pack unless your plan is to do one for each of the CMC (which could be a cool EP styled idea).

Anyway, keep at this, this is a great start.