<WIP> Eh. Working on something again.

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<WIP> Eh. Working on something again.

Postby Ed Viper » 10 Jan 2013 01:31

I still don't know what to call this. As I'm making it, I've found that it's heavily influenced by "Strobe" by Deadmau5.

Weird.

https://soundcloud.com/ed-viper/update-still-dont-know-what-to

Feedback, if any, would be appreciated.
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Re: <WIP> Eh. Working on something again.

Postby Stu Beef » 10 Jan 2013 02:02

There's a part of my brain that tells me this might be a tad static, but the rest of me is liking this. It's currently midnight where I am and I'd have to say this piece is perfect for that. I feel like I could just stare at a wall while this played and be perfectly content.


As for any kind of critique, seeing as you mostly build/transition with subtle texture/context changes (and cymbals), I was kinda hoping for something more different at the end. I was imagining something more wide, far away, etc. That's all personal preference to a level, but I think the idea of contrast in general would aid your track. Solid production either way.
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Re: <WIP> Eh. Working on something again.

Postby Ed Viper » 11 Jan 2013 02:20

Thanks for the feedback, man. I'm afraid I didn't put much of that into this, though. It's still pretty repetitive, but I kinda set out to do that with this track in the first place.

Anyway, I finished it tonight, so here you guys go.

https://soundcloud.com/ed-viper/eyelight

Any more feedback would be appreciated.
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