My name is Firo Rosso, I'm from Venezuela and I started producing music as a new hobby in which I want to make my best. This is my first track, the title is quite stupid but is my best try at FL Studio. Could you guys be so kind to give me some feedback and point my failures? Thanks in advance

I'm not sure if it's pony or not, by the way. I thought about Rarity when making this song

https://soundcloud.com/firo65/this-one-is-pretty-nice-too