<Original pony> Timberwolves

[Random111223]

Meh i dont really like how this turned out, but i made a promise to myself to upload whatever happens. It's drumstep i guess.
https://soundcloud.com/rand0m-2/ponice-timberwolves

[CarbonMaestro]

While I'm not a EDM artist, I can offer you a few tips. The Good, the bad, and the ugly edition!

Good:
I like the piano parts of the song. Nice start to a drumstep.

Bad:
I think you can still improve upon the bass drops, while your song has decent mid-range energy, it's going to need the high-range energy to make it distinct, and it'll need a deep sine wave in the background for "excitement."

Ugly:
The overall mix sounds pretty mono. I think it would be nice if you tried to make the mix more stereo, with different parts of the song making noise in the left and right speakers at different times. Like I said earlier, I think if you improve on the bass instruments with stronger bass instruments, you'll find your song to be better.

I hope you find this helpful, coming from an Orchestral musician listening to EDM.