Axiqor wrote:
Feedback please? It's pretty bad. Mostly I just need to keep it going. I have my stuff ready, just make it longer. Agree?
[EDIT] (Above) I like it. It's nice, keep it going.
Eh, hold off on that one, this idea in general just seems kinda terrible. The bandwagony sort of terrible. And a lot of the insufficient effort kinda terrible. Your sample still has clashing bgm in it, the the synth bells sound like they belong in trap, not in this song, the bass sounds really cheap, hard cuts.
Really, the whole thing is insubstantial, muddy, and lacking any sort of athmosphere. Everything from the synths, the amount of instruments, the drums, and the sample could use a lot of work.
Build your arena, then let your gladiators duke it out, don't start throwing stuff out there willy nilly.
As for this, I'd really just make something else.
I mean, I made really shit stuff when I was starting out too. You kinda gotta work out your production muscles a bit before you throw stuff on youtube. Get a soundcloud, man.
I'd also invest a little time in music theory. Like, scales and chords and shit. To learn what works and what really doesn't work.
Don't give up, just keep trying man. Aim to improve.
