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Postby Nicisflee » 02 Jan 2013 21:30

Delete my Profile please, please delete it
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Re: <Original><Hip-Hop><Rap>Rise Up

Postby meletric » 03 Jan 2013 02:43

I agree with Chip, the vocal mixing could use improvement. The vocals are too forward in the mix. Bringing them down a bit would help them feel more naturally integrated with the beat. Also, the panning on the vocals at 1:15 and 3:24 is much wider than the stereo imaging on the beat, which is causing some conflicting room imagery.

Hope that helps!
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Re: <Original><Hip-Hop><Rap>Rise Up

Postby Stu Beef » 03 Jan 2013 04:46

I listened to both of your songs and I find it hard to say anything. The production, the lines and the delivery all seem to be at a very consistent level. I get the sense that everything turned out as intended and are definitely effective in that regard.

Few things though:
You drop time when you get into faster rhythms; not really consistent with the style I think you're going for.
Doubled vocals definitely clash. See above, also mess with the EQ some maybe.

All other problems I will remain silent on. I would definitely consider them constructive criticism...but not exactly the technical sort.
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