[Pony][Original] Keystroke - Flutter Rage

[keystroke]

Released this today. Haven't put this much effort into a song insofar, but there is ALWAYS things lacking in everything, so PLEASE give me any feedback / recommendations you might have - I'd be very grateful. ^^) Thanks.

Edit: ...working on editing this song's equalization / volume levels among a few other minor changes...


FIXED!

[Ruka]

It's telling me the video is private..?

[keystroke]

It's telling me the video is private..?

Thanks for letting me know! I fixed it ^^)

[Genkar]

It sounds altogether really good, only major thing to me was it felt like everything progressed really fast, like you brought everything in too quickly, know what I mean? That might've been what you were going for, because it still sounds really good. However, if everything came at a slower pace, it would make the song last a bit longer, and it might be a bit easier to follow.

[keystroke]

It sounds altogether really good, only major thing to me was it felt like everything progressed really fast, like you brought everything in too quickly, know what I mean? That might've been what you were going for, because it still sounds really good. However, if everything came at a slower pace, it would make the song last a bit longer, and it might be a bit easier to follow.

Thanks, Genkar! I'll take that into consideration, as I'm revising it this week. I'll give more to melody at the beginning and see if that will do it. I wanted it to progress smoothly but not too quick to follow. ^^)

[keystroke]

So I'm extending and revising it a bit. This is where I'm at so far...
http://soundcloud.com/keystroke/flutter-rage-extended-wip

[Ruka]

I felt like I didn't get enough dept into the song. Like, you need to get some power into those kicks.
The synth also sounds a bit cheap and the wubs are imo a bit weak.

But don't misunderstand me: It's a great concept and all! It just needs a bit of work here and there :3

[keystroke]

Thanks Ruka! I'll make note of that. Also, most of my synths (and my DAW) are all free at the moment, except Massive, but I didn't use it this time. x3

Now, I DID make a revised version to this song, where I fixed the drums, extended the song, and changed a few other things as well. Don't really think it addressed the issues you've mentioned very well, though. XD ... Anyways, if you could give me feedback on the revised song, I'd be ever-the-more grateful. ^^)

So far, I've already had a friend tell me it should have had more build-up to the drop...



But thank you so much for your suggestions. So much better than the "Awesome track, bro" I'm geting from listenpledge.com XD

I'm putting this song to rest now. I'll take any suggestions to heart for music here-on-out.

[Ruka]

Except from the synth-sound and a few mastering problems. It's much better. Huge improvement.

Good job! ^^

[keystroke]

Except from the synth-sound and a few mastering problems. It's much better. Huge improvement.

Good job! ^^

Thanks! ^^)