OK, this certainly has potential, I'll give you that.
One thing I noticed right off the bat is that the drop lacks power. It's just kinda there, no real punch in the mix, sort of empty almost. Adding a stronger sub should probably fix that. If not, try adding some sidechained white noise or maybe a constant cymbal (of course light, but still there to fill the higher frequencies.
The drums feel... off, somehow. The kick is a tad weak, to fix that you should sidechain EVERYTHING (lightly) to the kick, even stuff you don't want to pump. Just play with the settings on your compressor until you get a barely noticeable sidechain. It can help your drums stand out better a lot. Further with the drums, I don't like the snare. It sounds short and weak, especially for house. You may have been better off going with a snappy clap/snare sound like the kind deadmau5 or Avicii use. Don't forget reverb on your drums, even the kick. Having light reverb, even on a kick, usually won't be noticeable but it helps your mix. Speaking of deadmau5, it might be in your best interests to purchase the Xfer pack, a very good sample pack for house (or really most genres). Not perfect, but it's got exactly the type of clap I'm talking about, among other nice samples.
The song itself felt like it kind of dragged on for longer than necessary. I realize it's only three minutes, but you could have easily taken out several sections of the drop and it would have been fine. Maybe a longer bridge was in order, if you want to maintain a three minute length.
Sidechain. Sidechain sidechain sidechain. This is house. All your main sounds should be sidechained fairly heavily during the drop. It sounds like very few are, which is kind of throwing me off as I expected drops of this style (ie not electro house) to be practically jumping up and down. Of course, this is somewhat of a personal preference though, not a requirement by any means.
One last thing; get rid of the 'Louder!!!' and 'yay' samples, along with their other associated lines. They are overdone to oblivion, just like 20% cooler is. Seriously, just drop them altogether, they're so cliche and almost annoying at this point.
So yes, there we go. Apologies if any of this comes off as overly critical, I really just want to help.
Happy new year
