<remix><pony> Lost On The Moon - Error404 Remix

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<remix><pony> Lost On The Moon - Error404 Remix

Postby Error404IsFound » 26 Dec 2012 16:05

Hey guys, check this out and maybe give some feedback for me? THanks!
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Re: <remix><pony> Lost On The Moon - Error404 Remix

Postby Genkar » 26 Dec 2012 17:57

I really like the way the kicks were EQ'd, the whole house feel really fits the song quite well. A lot your transitions flowed really nicely. I couldn't really find many major flaws, keep up the good work!
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Re: <remix><pony> Lost On The Moon - Error404 Remix

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 26 Dec 2012 21:09

Sounds good, but I don't think the melody doesn't progress very well. As in, the progression isn't very nice to listen to over and over. It's a bit tough to explain. Just listen to something like this:

https://soundcloud.com/djproject46/project-46-feel-the-fire-radio

This melody is practically the same measure over and over with very slight changes, but it sounds really good. I can't quite put my finger on it, but there's something I don't really like about the melody. Maybe it's actually the lead, but idk.

Other than that the track is great! The structuring is very good, and the mixing is cool too! Maybe the vocals could use a touch up, (They're hella dry) but besides that, epic song!
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Re: <remix><pony> Lost On The Moon - Error404 Remix

Postby Error404IsFound » 26 Dec 2012 22:29

Thanks! And I can understand what you see about the melody not progressing as good, I bet that is something that takes a lot of time and experience to get right, I'm going to keep working at it though. And PROJECT 46. I am a HUGE Fan of them, didn't even have to listen to the track to understand what you were talking about.
Thanks for the help
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Re: <remix><pony> Lost On The Moon - Error404 Remix

Postby Nine Volt » 27 Dec 2012 13:21

Toaster just commented on it 0.0
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Re: <remix><pony> Lost On The Moon - Error404 Remix

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 27 Dec 2012 16:31

Error404IsFound wrote:Thanks! And I can understand what you see about the melody not progressing as good, I bet that is something that takes a lot of time and experience to get right, I'm going to keep working at it though. And PROJECT 46. I am a HUGE Fan of them, didn't even have to listen to the track to understand what you were talking about.
Thanks for the help


Honestly you're probably way better at it than me lol. XD

But you're definitely welcome! And it's nice to see some other PRj46 fans out there too. :)
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Re: <remix><pony> Lost On The Moon - Error404 Remix

Postby Error404IsFound » 27 Dec 2012 16:54

Nine Volt wrote:Toaster just commented on it 0.0


OMIGOD. *cries*
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