<WIP><Original><Critique> Calling Cthulu(WIP VERSION)

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<WIP><Original><Critique> Calling Cthulu(WIP VERSION)

Postby Nonsense_Profile » 26 Dec 2012 11:03

This Morning, nonsense flowed.

Vocals are from an unreleased Carly Rea Jaspen song called "Ocean" given to me from her and her douche of a manager. So shout out to her... I guess?

Which also mean's this might just be the non vocal mix, and I could work with her... which would be pretty sweet...

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Re: <WIP><Original><Critique> Calling Cthulu(WIP VERSION)

Postby LoreRD » 26 Dec 2012 23:31

The bass that starts at 1:32 is too loud compared to the rest of the song. The hi-hat sounds dry as well, and the drums are too quiet in the second half. The vocals also get really drowned out at 1:00.

Other than that, it's shaping up well. The vocal glitching sounds quite neat and the instrumentation is really solid.
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Re: <WIP><Original><Critique> Calling Cthulu(WIP VERSION)

Postby Nonsense_Profile » 27 Dec 2012 00:43

LoreRD wrote:The bass that starts at 1:32 is too loud compared to the rest of the song. The hi-hat sounds dry as well, and the drums are too quiet in the second half. The vocals also get really drowned out at 1:00.

Other than that, it's shaping up well. The vocal glitching sounds quite neat and the instrumentation is really solid.


Vocals supposed to be drowned out, Bass is loud regardless, no mastering done yet, Thanks!
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