<pony> <wip> <original> Baq5 - Vinyl Scratch

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Re: <pony> <wip> <original> Baq5 - Vinyl Scratch

Postby randomblockfilms » 18 Dec 2012 13:19

ooohohohhOOOO very nice!! not much i can tell you but it sounds great! though the only thing that bothers me is the repetitiveness but cant really argue about taht because thats the style of the song. guess its a more personal preference.

but yeah it be rockin' might fine! :D
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Re: <pony> <wip> <original> Baq5 - Vinyl Scratch

Postby randomblockfilms » 18 Dec 2012 14:21

oh and i think i know one thing you could do to this! ok so im listin to it again and i think some vocals would be cool. just like singing," eeeeeyeeeeaaaaahhhh ooooohhhohohhhhhhooooooo!!!" although i picture a female voice in here, a vocoder voice would probably be just as cool!

and i think this would probably satisfy my little itty bitty rant about the repetitiveness. a vocal singing thing would break it up and make it less repetitive for me.
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Re: <pony> <wip> <original> Baq5 - Vinyl Scratch

Postby ph00tbag » 20 Dec 2012 02:19

I assume this will likely get dealt with as the track gets further, but those drops are a little bland. They could probably use some kind of fill or effect to make them more impactful.
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Re: <pony> <wip> <original> Baq5 - Vinyl Scratch

Postby MRPPony » 21 Dec 2012 12:36

ph00tbag wrote:I assume this will likely get dealt with as the track gets further, but those drops are a little bland. They could probably use some kind of fill or effect to make them more impactful.


Just what I was going to say. Also for variation sake, add some piano (or any instrument really) solo and have it slowly merge to the lead's pattern. As it does that, use a lowpass filter to filter in the lead (it should sound like a pluck's chains about to get released).

Well this is in its very, very early stage so I'll just leave it as that. Looking forward to hearing how this will turn out.
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Re: <pony> <wip> <original> Baq5 - Vinyl Scratch

Postby Decmaster IX » 21 Dec 2012 23:03

Okay okay okay okay so. .-.

Pretty good. That pitch-up is a little too up-front. Put it a little bit farther back in the mix and it'll blend a lot better. Same with the marimba down-fades (lol I have no idea what to call those).

One other thing. At the end of the build nothing really changes. Make it a lot bigger. Maybe try filtering in the lead before the "drop", or adding more percussion at the end of the build. And by this I mean a lot more filler stuff, like hats or bongos or something weird like that.

Also, I need need need need that lead sound. I've been looking for something like that for a long time, and all my progressive stuff has sounded like crap because I can't find any tutorials anywhere that sound anywhere near as good as that. They all say, "JSUT DEETUUN A SAA WAAV END THEEN BEEUWTEHFAL SAWNDS FALLOW." But that only ever sounds like crap. So, if you could send some advice my way, that'd be great.
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