<Pony> <Original> <Chill DnB> Zykrath - Fallen Apprentice

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<Pony> <Original> <Chill DnB> Zykrath - Fallen Apprentice

Postby Zykrath » 15 Dec 2012 23:11

"I'm... I'm sorry... This... Is it..."

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Re: <Pony> <Original> <Chill DnB> Zykrath - Fallen Apprentic

Postby Ruka » 16 Dec 2012 05:25

Ohmygod this is awesome. The drums were a little heavy for the relaxed song.
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Re: <Pony> <Original> <Chill DnB> Zykrath - Fallen Apprentic

Postby Nine Volt » 16 Dec 2012 14:42

Dayum, this is nice!

The drums, kick especially was perhaps a tad hard for this kind of song though. I really like the hat pattern. To me it feels like the 'drop' (or whatever the dnb term is :3) was too similar to the other parts, might've just been me though.

This is really good either way, keep it up!
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Re: <Pony> <Original> <Chill DnB> Zykrath - Fallen Apprentic

Postby ph00tbag » 16 Dec 2012 21:52

I feel like this would have been better with a bit more of an ambient breaks percussion section. This one is a tad too heavy, and kind of takes away from the main focus of the track, which is the melody.
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