<original> <pony> Mare In The Moon And All Her Guards

[Viricide Filly]

Not sure what genre to correctly label this as, sorry.



PLEASE tell me what you think and don't soften criticism. Thank you ^^

[bigBerd]

Okay, I know very little about actual music production, but I will give you my untrained ear and offer an unprofessional criticism.

I really like the way the two layers of drum patterns sorta play off each other, but your use of it is a bit excessive. I'd say limit it to the special parts of the song.
The part at the end where all the instruments are playing all staccato in unison I'd say is a good climax.
All in all, you've done a good job with this piece, though it may need trimming. Seven minutes can be a lot to bear, despite the several hours you've probably spent on this.