<WIP><Synth/Electro/Cheesepop> Untitled

[Raddons]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/84260720/final% ... mental.mp3

Untitled at the moment. I've been throwing some lyrical ideas around the past few days and hope to have something down soon.

I know it's tough to give feedback on an actual song without lyrics, but still. Can I have some feedback on the mixing/mastering/arrangment? Anything I should fix before I throw in the vocals? Anything that should be changed?

Also please pay no mind to the arpeggio cutting out at the first chorus. I had lots of stuff open while doing this render!

edit: all of these leads are really cute and i'm super proud of that bridge after the first chorus. I can't listen to it without smiling.

[Raddons]

haha bump

[Stu Beef]

could be cuter.

Maybe more varied transitions? You have that one break towards the end which is cool, though I'd have to see how the final product works. Maybe more rhythmic tension and release: building up to the next sections in more intense ways and then opening up when you make the transition. I also really like using silence as a prolongation into a section change, esp. when you widen everything up and throw in a lot more ornamentation (it HAS to be subito btw).

[Raddons]

"Oh, yay! A response to my thread!"

*checks*

"Ugh it's Stu"

Haha just kidding. Thank you very much (I already told you this)

[Quix]

I have no feedback to give you, I just wanted to say that I really, really like the song. I can't wait to hear it finished!

[randomblockfilms]

ooo i liek this lots!! the only thing i have about it is that it be kinda repetitive. but all yo synths and kicks n stuff be mighty fine