<REMIX>Magic Kindergarten(trap remix)

[aruigus808]

This is my first attempt at trap music...don't know if I hit it or not but I tried. I'm also fairly new to music so I'm sure it won't sound all that good. Here's what I got:
http://soundcloud.com/aruigus808/magic-kindergarten-trap-remix

Any advice/comments would be nice :3
~aruigus808

[vladnuke]

Maybe if you made the kick more bassy, and made the intro more interesting (i.e. add more elements), it would be better. Doing the whole single element thing is cool for an intro as long as you have something substantial to back it up at least 4 bars in. Also, the poni sample might fuck with the whole rap, one would have to build around that, it's stifling, and a bit plastic put on the rest of the track. Add more sub. Also, a trap beat with no hats or snares? I'm shocked. The hats in a trap beat are the glue of the whole track. It could be mixed harder, more compression to make the track level out at 0db.

Bascially add more song. This song needs more elements.