<Pony><Original> Raising The Sun [Progressive House]

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Hey, could you guys check this out and give some feedback? I'm trying to get a refined mastered sound without peaking or muddyness. Thanks!

[colortwelve]

As far as the technical bits go, it's a pretty good-sounding mixdown to me, except the lead sounds like it could be a little brighter, it feels half-stuck inside the mix as opposed to popping out like a lead should. But I think you accomplished a fairly polished sound here overall.

However, as for the song itself, it's really, really generic and repetitive, and while I can get it if this song was more of a tech demo than anything else, mixing practice or whatever, it's always something to be wary of. This song doesn't feel like it goes anywhere past about a minute and a half in, because it just doubles back on itself with the same melody playing on repeat. So a little more time spent composing this one probably would've helped too.

[Moose]

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This

I really like the melody, kinda like Levels