<original> <power rave> NegaNote & Nikki Layne - Maelstrom

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<original> <power rave> NegaNote & Nikki Layne - Maelstrom

Postby NegaNote » 07 Nov 2012 19:49

http://soundcloud.com/neganote/maelstrom

Hope you guys like this. Constructive criticism is appreciated :D
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Re: <original> <power rave> NegaNote & Nikki Layne - Maelstr

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 08 Nov 2012 07:10

Woah, the mixing on that bassdrum could really use some work. At some points it's nearly completely drowned out. Also, the bass is way too distorted. I love the hihat pattern, but it is practically unhearable during the drop. I really think all you need to improve is the mix, and maybe a better outro instead of just filtering out. (Though it doesn't sound that bad here)
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Re: <original> <power rave> NegaNote & Nikki Layne - Maelstr

Postby NegaNote » 08 Nov 2012 07:46

I can hear the kick pretty well throughout, not sure why you say otherwise. Doesn't ever seem drowned out. Maybe the attack is drowned out a bit? There was some velocity variation on it, that could be the problem.

Blame the outro on Nikki, he did the song structure :P
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Re: <original> <power rave> NegaNote & Nikki Layne - Maelstr

Postby Kushy Kallous » 08 Nov 2012 09:05

xDD Another Nikki-passoff.
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Re: <original> <power rave> NegaNote & Nikki Layne - Maelstr

Postby NegaNote » 08 Nov 2012 10:40

Haha, I wonder how Nikki feels about that statement.

Also, XXDarkShadow79XX... the hi-hats are clear in the mix, as far as I can tell. It's probably just that they're not playing very often :P
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Re: <original> <power rave> NegaNote & Nikki Layne - Maelstr

Postby Nikki-Layne » 08 Nov 2012 12:18

XXDarkShadow79XX wrote:Woah, the mixing on that bassdrum could really use some work. At some points it's nearly completely drowned out. Also, the bass is way too distorted. I love the hihat pattern, but it is practically unhearable during the drop. I really think all you need to improve is the mix, and maybe a better outro instead of just filtering out. (Though it doesn't sound that bad here)



That was actually done on purpose. Whenever the kick hits quickly it drops in volume. I did this to help keep focus on the other elements of the song. In retrospect though, it is a very atypical way to mix and possibly was not the best of ideas.

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Re: <original> <power rave> NegaNote & Nikki Layne - Maelstr

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 08 Nov 2012 14:26

Ah I see. Alrighty then. I actually really like the sample you guys used for the kick.
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Re: <original> <power rave> NegaNote & Nikki Layne - Maelstr

Postby NegaNote » 08 Nov 2012 19:48

Yeah, Nikki. Especially in rave, the kick is supposed to punch through the whole mix. Don't do the lowering volume thing next time :P
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