<pony><WIP><original><post-hardcore> Feedback wanted!

[RestrainedMadness]

http://soundcloud.com/skeels/post-hardcore-wip

I'm tempted to re-record the bass, since it sounds a bit messy. Anything else that should be changed/fixed?

[ghelded_kultz]

Not bad. It's nice to see some punkier music in the brony fandom (even if its just post-hardcore). As far as fix/changes, I am not the best person to give advice for that, but again, I liked the piece. Good job.

[MALevolence]

well done. i like the intro portion, i thought it played its part well. the entirety of the piece was well played out, and it i could definitely feel, well, the feeling of the song. i think the only thing i wasnt a fan of was that the cymbal crashes rang out far too long. every section where you had repeated cymbal crashes, they rang too much. if youre going for consecutive crashes, you should try and dampen them a bit. the overall ring detract from the rest of the piece and creates a background drone. id say that was my only problem with this. otherwise, great job.

[RestrainedMadness]

well done. i like the intro portion, i thought it played its part well. the entirety of the piece was well played out, and it i could definitely feel, well, the feeling of the song. i think the only thing i wasnt a fan of was that the cymbal crashes rang out far too long. every section where you had repeated cymbal crashes, they rang too much. if youre going for consecutive crashes, you should try and dampen them a bit. the overall ring detract from the rest of the piece and creates a background drone. id say that was my only problem with this. otherwise, great job.

Thanks a lot for the feedback! Never even thought about modifying the cymbals, so that tip really helps! ^^