<P><O><wip> "Theme Of Cloudsdale" [DREAM HOUSE]

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<P><O><wip> "Theme Of Cloudsdale" [DREAM HOUSE]

Postby BassRabbit » 18 Oct 2012 02:25

Critique! Please! I'm doing this song for Toxic-Dash and I want to make it as great as possible.

"I'm not smart, I just have a good vocabulary."

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Re: <P><O><wip> "Theme Of Cloudsdale" [DREAM HOUSE]

Postby Random111223 » 18 Oct 2012 12:29

Nice and dreamy

- I would add a proper breakdown and buildup, especially to take the kick away as it's banging through almost the whole song

- I can imagine sidechaining will make this sound alot better. Try adding it to the pads to make them "breathe"

- Generally move diversity and sound processing, cant really give any magical tricks to solve this :lol:
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