[WIP][Pony][ElectroHouse] Sweet Revenge

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[WIP][Pony][ElectroHouse] Sweet Revenge

Postby Sonic Breakbeat » 13 Oct 2012 22:07

Feedback as well as naming suggestions are appreciated!
I got a name ^^ Feedback is still needed, though!


Song released! Thanks to everypony who gave feedback!

Last edited by Sonic Breakbeat on 19 Oct 2012 15:47, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: [WIP][Pony][ElectroHouse] Untitled at the moment...

Postby DrSorkenstein » 14 Oct 2012 09:32

I think it'd be really cool to have a calmer breakout somewhere with some different chords or progressions to spice things up a bit. I like the song but in what way is it pony related? Right now it really has nothing that reminds me of or connects it to the show.
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Re: [WIP][Pony][ElectroHouse] Untitled at the moment...

Postby Sonic Breakbeat » 14 Oct 2012 11:06

DrSorkenstein wrote:I think it'd be really cool to have a calmer breakout somewhere with some different chords or progressions to spice things up a bit. I like the song but in what way is it pony related? Right now it really has nothing that reminds me of or connects it to the show.

I was planning on using different chords on the break, but that progression is only used in the beginning and thought it'd be weird if it was only used once. I think I changed it enough for it to not be as repetitive.

How is it pony related? You didn't hear the sound clips right before the drop? Are they too quiet? o_O
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Re: [WIP][Pony][ElectroHouse] Untitled at the moment...

Postby DrSorkenstein » 14 Oct 2012 11:35

Whoops, I derp'd a bit there. :oops:
Try picking a name that suits the mood of the track I suppose.
I'm not very good at names myself.
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Re: [WIP][Pony][ElectroHouse] Untitled at the moment...

Postby Sonic Breakbeat » 14 Oct 2012 12:07

DrSorkenstein wrote:Whoops, I derp'd a bit there. :oops:
Try picking a name that suits the mood of the track I suppose.
I'm not very good at names myself.

Np ^^ I think the sample itself doesn't stand out as much with the bass being there, so I might have to fix it to make it more noticeable.

As for names; I don't have any ideas really, besides maybe "Rarity's Revenge". Though I'm not good with names either :D
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Re: [WIP][Pony][ElectroHouse] Sweet Revenge

Postby Sonic Breakbeat » 15 Oct 2012 21:15

Ahem *Bump*
Song was updated a few times.
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http://soundcloud.com/epicallyawsm/stargazing
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VSTs: Massive, Sylenth1, Battery 3, Ozone 5, Melodyne
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Re: [WIP][Pony][ElectroHouse] Sweet Revenge

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 16 Oct 2012 18:37

Wow. This is fantastic and everything is near perfect. But the one thing I have to complain about is those buildups. One quiet as hell upriser and then out of nowhere a sample. The buildup needs some drum rolls, white noise, extra synth, just something to make them more epic. That's really about it though. Oh yeah, and don't forget that downlifter at the drop to make it sound bigger. ;)

(Unless you don't want that kind of thing, which is fine)
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Re: [WIP][Pony][ElectroHouse] Sweet Revenge

Postby Captain Ironhelm » 16 Oct 2012 19:53

Didn't have the volume super high since I don't want to bother other people, but the vocal samples could be a little bit louder. (imo)
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Re: [WIP][Pony][ElectroHouse] Sweet Revenge

Postby Sonic Breakbeat » 16 Oct 2012 22:14

Thank you both for the feedback. As for the buildup, I've already got the claps speeding up as well as a riser (though yeah it is a bit quiet). I'll take your advice and add something behind it or some white noise.

As for the sample volume, I'm still trying to get it to sound loud enough, but not too loud. It's much more difficult because I have to fit it's frequencies in with that bass sweep. The sample itself also gets quieter towards the end, so I might just have to fix that.

I'm going to be spending the next few days that thankfully I have off from work to finish it up, so if you have any other things to say, go right ahead! ^^
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