<original><rnb beat> Lost

[Nine Volt]

http://soundcloud.com/nine-volt/nine-volt-lost

My first try at Rnb beats/something serious sounding. So what do you guys think?

[itroitnyah]

It sounds out of tune at the start, but then the problem appears to fix itself after the strings come in at around 0.15, and picks up again at around 3.05. I think that it might be the reverb on the lead synth. You don't need a whole lot of reverb to make something sound better. Also, this is way to repetitive, you need to change it up a bit. But pretty good over all

[Nine Volt]

YOU DARE CONSTRUCTIVELY CRITICIZE MY SONG?!?!??!?!?!??!??!?1/!?!?!?
I WILL DESTROY YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111!!!!!!1!!!!!!!111111

jk Thanks for teh input mang