(Nonpony)(Original) Beyond the Stars(Birthday Song)

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(Nonpony)(Original) Beyond the Stars(Birthday Song)

Postby KemicolKid97 » 23 Sep 2012 19:34


The genre from what i believe is *Trance/Dirty Dutch.I can do a birthday shout out if you want, may not be everybody's request.... anyways enjoy!
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Re: (Nonpony)(Original) Beyond the Stars(Birthday Song)

Postby Symphon » 23 Sep 2012 20:04

The general feel of this is very consistent, smooth, and quite enjoyable. It's got just enough energy to keep you going for a long time, and the rises are very well done. However, some parts seem to be lacking the same push the other parts get. Maybe it's the lack of a more energetic synth at parts such as 2:00. Either way, I did enjoy this track. Nice job and keep it up. Mix up the synths a bit more and experiment and you should be able to get some more unique variance.
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Re: (Nonpony)(Original) Beyond the Stars(Birthday Song)

Postby KemicolKid97 » 23 Sep 2012 20:11

TunerSymphon wrote:The general feel of this is very consistent, smooth, and quite enjoyable. It's got just enough energy to keep you going for a long time, and the rises are very well done. However, some parts seem to be lacking the same push the other parts get. Maybe it's the lack of a more energetic synth at parts such as 2:00. Either way, I did enjoy this track. Nice job and keep it up. Mix up the synths a bit more and experiment and you should be able to get some more unique variance.

I can try to make it more energetic, but it is supposed to be simple modified saw, i can try =P
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Re: (Nonpony)(Original) Beyond the Stars(Birthday Song)

Postby Symphon » 23 Sep 2012 20:24

If its focus was simplicity, than by all means, ignore that comment. c:
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Re: (Nonpony)(Original) Beyond the Stars(Birthday Song)

Postby KemicolKid97 » 24 Sep 2012 21:44

TunerSymphon wrote:If its focus was simplicity, than by all means, ignore that comment. c:

It can be more advanced but i dont know how to make it more advanced but basic modified saws work
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