[Pony][Breakcore][WIP]Eye of the Minotaur (TiGEr ReMiX)

[Ohffy]

Breakcore Glitch stuff, guitar inspired by Iron Will's Stage music
Im really excited about finishing this
Voice sampling from the best Minotaur ever will be coming
Critique is welcomed
Thanks for Listening

http://soundcloud.com/ohffy/eye-of-the-minotaur-tiger

[Markelius]

This sounds like you looped the amen break and threw dBlue glitch on top of it. Sorry, I don't like it.

[XXDarkShadow79XX]

This sounds like you looped the amen break and threw dBlue glitch on top of it. Sorry, I don't like it.

I have to agree with this. It doesn't sound very breakcore-like.

[Ohffy]

This sounds like you looped the amen break and threw dBlue glitch on top of it. Sorry, I don't like it.

Thanks Guys you dont know how happy reading this makes me feel
Is there anything else that seems off or anything that should be fixed?
Or is there something missing that should be added?

[Markelius]

Is there anything else that seems off or anything that should be fixed?
Or is there something missing that should be added?

Well, instead of using a loop that continues the whole song, try writing break patterns, and lots of them. Seriously, the fun thing about breakcore is that you can just go all out with breaks. Try making loads and loads of different break patterns and arranging them in a creative and non-repetitive way.

I don't know what you're running for glitches (I'm assuming dBlue), but I tend to steer clear from dBlue as the fx can become very repetitive sounding very easily. Again I don't even know what DAW you're running but if it's FL you should try Gross Beat, fool around with it a bit and learn how it works, then you can make your own presets and other cool stuff. There's also a free VST called Live-Cut which Aphex Twin has used that's apparently really powerful for glitches, I haven't learned it myself but Aphex Twin has used it so it's probably pretty powerful. There are also a number of free VST's like Shattersync and Necroloop that are pretty powerful for glitch making.

Finally, my personal favourite, if you can get a hold of it I strongly recommend using Stutter Edit, Designed by BT himself and built by Izotope, the plugin is controlled by midi-out and you can make all sorts of patches for it using FX like bitcrushes, delays, stereo separation, and tons more, look it up if you're interested.

Wow, I really sound like an advertisement there.

EDIT: I just listened to your new edit, I still think you need to improve what I've already said, but I have a few new things to suggest as well. Try not to layer too many sounds at once, instead figit between multiple sounds with the drums as your bridges between them.

2nd EDIT: You should listen to this for inspiration, it's some of the hardest and most well produced and well written breakcore I've heard.

[Ohffy]

Is there anything else that seems off or anything that should be fixed?
Or is there something missing that should be added?

Well, instead of using a loop that continues the whole song, try writing break patterns, and lots of them. Seriously, the fun thing about breakcore is that you can just go all out with breaks. Try making loads and loads of different break patterns and arranging them in a creative and non-repetitive way.

Thanks for the info man
really I'll take what you've said to heart
(yes Im using FL STudio)
Thanks again