I really, really like the vocals starting from 0:45 and 2:18 and during the soft drop as someone has put it . I would make the bass more audible during the breakdown/intro sections, but just by a little. Maybe add some subtle reverb to them wubs. Oh, and I guess you're new here. Hello,welcome to MLR! You should check out the Introduction thread to... well, introduce yourself .
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Ooh. I like this one a lot. Those chopped vocals are really nice. Couple things though.
- Piano coming in at the beginning sounds oddly-timed with the vocals. - The singing/non-chopped vocals could use a touch of reverb. - The snare's panned delay is favoring the left too much; maybe pan the whole thing to the right, or use a ping-pong delay with slight panning. - I'm not sure what you were trying to do with Scootaloo's voice at about 3:15, but it sounds very strange. - The ending is a little sudden. May I suggest an outro of some sort?