< Original > <DnB> Thats One Dark Forest

[KillerAmp]

http://soundcloud.com/officialkilleramp/thats-one-dark-forest
First attempt at any DnB stuff
ANY and ALL help would be awesome
im also working on a dubstep track right now which i hope to finish soon
the reason this is a rather short song is because it was my first attempt and quite honestly the song itself is quite repetitive and i didnt know what to do to keep the track interesting for much longer!
thanks for the listen!^^

[Habanc]

Expand the piano melody. After 0:45 give it some more flavor by making the melody longer.

Sometimes it's better to use what you already have rather than adding instruments.

[Hangin' From A Cloud]

0:00 WOW. I didn't expect it to get intense that fast... i mean instantly. The song sits on the same intensity level all the time. I kept expecting it to get even more heavy. Or have a breakdown section.
Try to have some sort of structure. It helps to keep things interesting.