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<original><pony> Flutterbye

Postby neuropony » 24 Aug 2012 11:09



First released song.

First attempt at Neurofunk.

It can't end well.

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Re: <original><pony> Flutterbye

Postby Habanc » 24 Aug 2012 12:10

First off, since you're new to the site; Hi! Welcome to MLR! You may want to introduce yourself here. Thanks for reading the rules for posting in the music section, as I've seen you've used the proper tags in the title. If you have any questions, music or otherwise, you can hop on the IRC (If you don't have an IRC chat program, you can use the flash version by clicking "(Flash)" above), and usually someone will be around to answer!

To the song:

I don't listen to much Neurofunk, but this sounded pretty good. I can't tell if that was a pony sample you used around 0:34 and 2:48 (The "Hey" sound, I think), but it was really quiet. If it was part of one audio sample with the "hello?", maybe you could automate the volume to make the "Hey" sound a bit louder. '

The FX in the background were a nice touch, but a few felt a bit overused, do you have any others you could swap in and help mix it up? If not, that's fine! Not many listeners would notice consciously, but it could make the track feel less repetitive.
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Re: <original><pony> Flutterbye

Postby neuropony » 24 Aug 2012 12:21

Habanc wrote:First off, since you're new to the site; Hi! Welcome to MLR! You may want to introduce yourself here. Thanks for reading the rules for posting in the music section, as I've seen you've used the proper tags in the title. If you have any questions, music or otherwise, you can hop on the IRC (If you don't have an IRC chat program, you can use the flash version by clicking "(Flash)" above), and usually someone will be around to answer!

To the song:

I don't listen to much Neurofunk, but this sounded pretty good. I can't tell if that was a pony sample you used around 0:34 and 2:48 (The "Hey" sound, I think), but it was really quiet. If it was part of one audio sample with the "hello?", maybe you could automate the volume to make the "Hey" sound a bit louder. '

The FX in the background were a nice touch, but a few felt a bit overused, do you have any others you could swap in and help mix it up? If not, that's fine! Not many listeners would notice consciously, but it could make the track feel less repetitive.


I was going for a more atmospheric feel with this track, but I can understand some of the FX being a bit repetitive.

I actually rushed this track a bit considering the amount of time I had to finish it.
I finished it in 6 hours; I believe.

Thanks for the feedback though! I appreciate it (a lot)
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Re: <original><pony> Flutterbye

Postby Hangin' From A Cloud » 25 Aug 2012 14:39

The drums sound really nice. The synths too. DAT BASS. Oh hell, everything sounds awesome.
I feel that the drop is a little dry though. I would try adding a melody in a higher register or something.
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