<nonpony-so far><wip><original> Time Rift

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<nonpony-so far><wip><original> Time Rift

Postby R-Y-S-E » 23 Aug 2012 04:59

I'm hoping this will be my best attempt at a complextro track yet. I'd appreciate feedback because I'm not great at complextro just yet (I do a lot of electro and stuff but it's never the sort of complextro I would like to make). I put nonpony-so far because I may decide to make a pony version with a few tweaks, but this one won't be pony.

Here it is [Updated! v2]:
http://soundcloud.com/r-y-s-e/time-rift-teaser-wip-v2

Thanks :)
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Re: <nonpony-so far><wip><original> Time Rift

Postby Hangin' From A Cloud » 23 Aug 2012 06:38

I don't know much about complextro either, but the kick could use a bit more punch (perhaps bring up the low shelf?). Interesting, the kick in the intro is a little hard to hear, but in the drop it gets better.
But i know one thing: I like where that drop is going. And the sound design too.
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Re: <nonpony-so far><wip><original> Time Rift

Postby R-Y-S-E » 23 Aug 2012 10:27

Hangin' From A Cloud wrote:I don't know much about complextro either, but the kick could use a bit more punch (perhaps bring up the low shelf?). Interesting, the kick in the intro is a little hard to hear, but in the drop it gets better.
But i know one thing: I like where that drop is going. And the sound design too.
Thanks for the feedback! I've boosted all the drums before the drop (and, admittedly, the drums after the drop have been boosted very, very slightly too!). I've also tweaked a load of the sounds, mainly the beep I made too loud (dunno how I didn't realize it at first). I'll upload the updated version in a moment :)
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Re: <nonpony-so far><wip><original> Time Rift

Postby R-Y-S-E » 23 Aug 2012 11:21

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