<wip> <remix> Constellations (UltimateRiff Remix)

[UltimateRiff]

Just asking for some critiques before I send it off to Aviators for his "From All Sides" remix contest.

http://soundcloud.com/ultimateriff/constellations-remix-wip-03

[-djmk-]

this is nice, dude
chill, funky, definitely spacey and befitting the lyrics
however it's nothing too impressive in terms of technical knowledge but that's fine it sounds nice regardless

[Aviators]

The lyrics appear to cut out at the end of each verse, which is a bit of an issue. I'm not sure if that was intentional or not. Overall it's sounding pretty good! The thing I'm noticing is that it sounds like you just heavily based the remix on the MIDI. Maybe try doing some new melodies? Maybe try something special on the drop? I like the lo-fi vibe, it feels very 90's to me. One thing that could be amped up is the bass, also.

Well done, and I look forward to hearing the final version!

[UltimateRiff]

The lyrics appear to cut out at the end of each verse, which is a bit of an issue. I'm not sure if that was intentional or not.

It was not intentional, thanks for pointing that out!

Yeah, and I guess I did pretty much copypasta the MIDI, didn't I... *teehee?* I'll try changing it up a little.