<Pony> <Original> <Orchestral> The First Kiss

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<Pony> <Original> <Orchestral> The First Kiss

Postby SpyPie » 02 Aug 2012 23:13

Something short and sweet.

It explains the First act of love ever enacted during the first days of Equestria.

http://soundcloud.com/mutagen-2/the-first-kiss
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Re: <Pony> <Original> <Orchestral> The First Kiss

Postby Dr_Dissonance » 02 Aug 2012 23:38

Nice chord progression, but nothing really happening in the music. Try adding some arpeggios, ostinatos or more interesting movement in each voice. Strings playing block chords is never interesting.
Ending was neat though, I'd like to hear more of that!
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Re: <Pony> <Original> <Orchestral> The First Kiss

Postby VINXIS » 03 Aug 2012 00:21

Woah, Dr... you're back on MLR :o :D (either that or I hab problemo)

Anyways, I hab to agree with Dr; string shords aren't that interesting/thrilling as arpeggios.

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Re: <Pony> <Original> <Orchestral> The First Kiss

Postby WavesOfParadox » 03 Aug 2012 11:28

Yep, maybe you should make that ending your beginning and then expand on some of the things going on there with the chord progression you originally thought of.
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