<Pony><Acoustic> When Home Calls - A song for scootaloo

[Joaftheloaf]

I was inspired to write this song from this comic:
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/ ... 476m8y.png

Tell me what you think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GASJsYs-VBk&feature=plcp

[MatthewMosierMusic]

Wow dude, this is beautiful!! I love your voice! This needs to be on EqD!

though, I don't think its <pony> enough for them. Don't qoute me on that, but they seem to only put up vocal music if it is explicitly pony.

Also, the song is amazing, but the guitar gets kinda repetitive. Maybe an instrumental break with different chords?

That being said, I think this is good enough to get on anyways. Give it a shot!

[Joaftheloaf]

thanks dude! Thank you for the input, I l love criticism! Normally my songs have a verse, pre chorus, bridge etc. but when I wrote the guitar for this I wanted a simple picking pattern with a simple song setup like I will follow you into the dark by death cab for cutie. I'll try next time to add more variety! Again thanks for the input!

[TheLustyArgonianMaid]

When the sun and the moon are in perfect alignment all is foreseen through the unwavering eyes of the onlooker. I thank you Joaftheloaf for producing this harmonized melody of great inspiration. Continue to walk in the light of the stars and never stray far from your path.