(ORIGINAL)(PONY)(Heavy Orchestraic) Kyoga - Beyond the Gates

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Re: (ORIGINAL)(PONY)(Heavy Orchestraic) Kyoga - Beyond the G

Postby Thyrai » 28 Jul 2012 03:33

I think I'm having a love affair with your music. This one is masterfully done.

The horn that comes in around 3:00 sounds amazing. Maybe it could be a tiny bit louder?
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Re: (ORIGINAL)(PONY)(Heavy Orchestraic) Kyoga - Beyond the G

Postby Dr_Dissonance » 28 Jul 2012 08:38

What does Orchestraic mean? I've never heard that term before...

That being said, this was nice. From an orchestral viewpoint, the orchestration is quite basic. Nothing terribly exciting or interesting happening. I'd recommend maybe using more of the range that instruments have. Violins up a few octaves could work, as could some winds up high in places.
A lot of the time, I felt instruments were too quiet and were drowned out too easily by the percussion. Consider making the electronics/percussion and orchestra on equal footing, instead of this quiet orchestra in the background. But that being said, the combination of the electronic sounds worked quite well!

Neat job!
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Re: (ORIGINAL)(PONY)(Heavy Orchestraic) Kyoga - Beyond the G

Postby VINXIS » 28 Jul 2012 19:29

It goes to like glitch orchestra, not REALLY HEAVY orchestra (I'm exaggerating aren't I... :P) and you should lower the volume of the "white" noise that you added. Other than that, Image IT'S AMAZING
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Re: (ORIGINAL)(PONY)(Heavy Orchestraic) Kyoga - Beyond the G

Postby colortwelve » 28 Jul 2012 19:54

Thyrai wrote:I think I'm having a love affair with your music.

It happens to everyone around here :3
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Re: (ORIGINAL)(PONY)(Heavy Orchestraic) Kyoga - Beyond the G

Postby LunchBagMusic » 28 Jul 2012 20:20

Everything that Dr. Dissonance said.

You can make percussion the dominant force of your sound without drowning out the actual tones and chords behind it.

I also think (and this is mostly a matter of taste) that the fadeout is clumsy and ruins the piece.

But yeah, Kyoga this is great!
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Re: (ORIGINAL)(PONY)(Heavy Orchestraic) Kyoga - Beyond the G

Postby konsolN » 29 Jul 2012 14:26

Wow,
IF I had one complain, it would be... there is none, I liked everything I heard :)

I'ts everything I want to achieve, full sound experience with no holes where you would think that something is missing. I don't know what your Original Goal is, but this is in my opinion an awesome piece of Music.
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